I agree with Elr - this is so well written and perfectly executed.
One of the things I love in a story is when an author takes dialogue and events of canon and tweaks them to create a totally different reality while keeping true to the feel of the series. You have done that so wonderfully here and I was bouncing in delight as I kept reading.
What I liked - Peter staying true to his belief that Neal specifically shot him so he would live.
Neal's angst - you do Neal's angst so well.
Food porn!!! (and the dichotomy of Neal's lack of appetite to the wonderful descriptions of the meals)
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Date: 2014-10-18 03:57 pm (UTC)I agree with Elr - this is so well written and perfectly executed.
One of the things I love in a story is when an author takes dialogue and events of canon and tweaks them to create a totally different reality while keeping true to the feel of the series. You have done that so wonderfully here and I was bouncing in delight as I kept reading.
What I liked - Peter staying true to his belief that Neal specifically shot him so he would live.
Neal's angst - you do Neal's angst so well.
Food porn!!! (and the dichotomy of Neal's lack of appetite to the wonderful descriptions of the meals)
Brava - excellent, excellent job!