Oh wow... I was a little leery, given the warning of non-con, but I was really curious how this AU would play out. You wrote it so beautifully, and even though I just wanted to smack Adler, and shake some sense into Neal, I loved it. I felt so bad for Neal - having to shoot Peter then just succumb to Adler and stay for what he felt was the only way to keep everyone safe. I am glad Reese and Peter were able to get through to him. Really, you did a wonderful job, keeping Neal in character despite the difficult situation he was placed in. And I enjoyed how you weaved in canon! It worked out great.
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Date: 2014-10-09 05:49 pm (UTC)