Oh, pooh, this is so wonderful. I ended up waking up in the middle of the night last night and finishing reading this, and I loved it so much. You did such a great job of writing a Neal who was not quite broken but certainly rather folded and spindled by the things Adler did to him and made him do, and the ways you turned canon events to your own purposes was fantastic. ♥
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Date: 2014-10-01 01:41 am (UTC)